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Topic Started: May 29 2013, 08:08 PM (170,054 Views)
Scp079
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The Dragons did NOTHING wrong
Thirding Quark, some Ratchet and Clank representation would be nice, and he's the best candidate except for Dr. Nefarious, and I can't imagine a CAW of him would look good.
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Choco Nath
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Here's Qwark in all his glory. Not sure if the CAW is up to scratch, so if anyone has ideas for improvements feel free to let me know.

Name: Captain Qwark
Series: Ratchet and Clank
Theme: Metropolis couldn't find a theme that really fitted an Entrance, again any ideas let me know.
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slashkamei
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Shoulders and chin need to be MUCH wider for one, max that out, waist a bit narrower...see if you can't make the nose as small as possable and...thats all I can nitpick right out of the gate, you got a good base and the outfit looks spot on.
Edited by slashkamei, Jan 26 2014, 02:57 PM.
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Choco Nath
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slashkamei
Jan 26 2014, 02:55 PM
Shoulders and chin need to be MUCH wider for one, max that out, waist a bit narrower...see if you can't make the nose as small as possable and...thats all I can nitpick right out of the gate, you got a good base and the outfit looks spot on.
Shoulders are maxed out as well as the chin. Tried widening the face as a whole which seems to have improved the look slightly also thinned the waist out, seems to have made a great improvement.
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also i apologize for the pic, my capture cards started playing up so I had to use my phone.
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pyrrhickong
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For Qwark, max out head size and then reduce Cranium and Forehead. This should get you the 'big chin' you're looking for, especially if you max out chin width and reduce... I forget, it's one of 'thickness' or 'upper line'. Usually that gives you the square jaw you're looking for.

Also add the butt chin to him under textures. Bitches love the Qwark butt chin.
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MaxOfFewTrades

I'm not sure how possible the idea is, but the idea of a Quark/Groose tag team sounds amazing. They are both jerk egotists the at the end of the day helped the hero out when they really needed them. The similarity's they share are almost astonishing to be honest.

I have no experience making CAW's so I can't give technical advise, but what you have right here is actually much better then I thought would be possible. I think if you slim his forehead down his chin should look bigger which is important, and the slimmer the waist and the wider the shoulders the better.

Keep at it, its almost perfect!
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Choco Nath
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Jan 26 2014, 05:45 PM
For Qwark, max out head size and then reduce Cranium and Forehead. This should get you the 'big chin' you're looking for, especially if you max out chin width and reduce... I forget, it's one of 'thickness' or 'upper line'. Usually that gives you the square jaw you're looking for.

Also add the butt chin to him under textures. Bitches love the Qwark butt chin.
never thought of the double chin, added that and increased the head size, also added a bit of green above his nose. Don't think there's much more that can be done now, quite pleased how its turn out with everyones help ;D
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Give that Quark traps for days to help make his head flow directly into his body.
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Warning, Incoming CAW! Warning, Incoming CAW!

Bob from Reboot!
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You can blame insomnia for this one, but he actually did star in at least one video game for the original Playstation!

It's just a pity that game was utterly terrible.
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slashkamei
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Damnit Poptart, now I want to watch that show again ;.;

Anyhow I meant to post this before...and kinda keep forgetting to so yeah.

Leon S. Kennedy from RE4

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Choco Nath
Jan 26 2014, 01:39 PM
Here's Qwark in all his glory. Not sure if the CAW is up to scratch, so if anyone has ideas for improvements feel free to let me know.

Name: Captain Qwark
Series: Ratchet and Clank
Theme: Metropolis couldn't find a theme that really fitted an Entrance, again any ideas let me know.
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The eyes look abnormally big compared to the original.
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Choco Nath
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Well i've attempted Gitaroo Man....
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Will be best I can get him detail wise, ran into a problem when i maxed out the layers in the creator. Still have to add the back logo (last spot left) but if anyone wants to see him finished and recorded just let me know.
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slashkamei
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Jan 27 2014, 05:40 PM
Well i've attempted Gitaroo Man....
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Will be best I can get him detail wise, ran into a problem when i maxed out the layers in the creator. Still have to add the back logo (last spot left) but if anyone wants to see him finished and recorded just let me know.
holy...thats better than I was expecting honestly, his theme better be The Legendary Theme
Edited by slashkamei, Jan 27 2014, 06:32 PM.
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Yeah, same. It may not be perfect but it definitely looks like Gitaroo Man.
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hey its a belt right
That Gitaroo CAW is great. I think he would be great addition to VGCW or EDBW for the music options alone.
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