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Topic Started: May 29 2013, 08:08 PM (170,032 Views)
Sciencejoe
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DesuBlade
Jun 17 2014, 03:09 PM
Sciencejoe
Jun 16 2014, 07:11 AM
Heihachi


The one issue with simple designs like Heihachi and others is that you have to do something to make that simple design seem less simple. Case in point, his gi needs to have tears on his shoulder area and his gi in general needs to look more worn out. Same with his pants. He also needs tears on his lower end of his pants.

Another issue I have is that Heihachi's eyebrows seem too normal. Give him the "Segata" eyebrows(the ones with a curve at the end with spikes on the curve. You can't miss it.). His moustache needs little spikes on the end of it too. Looks far too normal. He has to be more angry looking. Heihachi has always been angry as hell and he looks too content. His entrance needs the Ryback lightning pyro somewhere. It fits with what he does and all that stuff. Also, why is he like....yellow? He's just a bit more pale than normal skin color. Don't see why he's yellow unless it's a joke on how he's Asian.
Good point with the tears and battle damage on gi and pants.

I tried to give him the stupidest, biggest looking eyebrows that I could; Segata's would probably work better. Fair point.

And I literally just noticed how his skin looks that...erm, yellow. And no that's not intentional by any means. I just suck with skin color changing in the CAW creator. Whenever I try to make an African-American CAW, they either look like they've been absorbed by the shadows or like a white guy with blackface on.

Keeping these things in mind, I'll be working on it and reuploading him.

In the meantime, I fixed up his sideburns and reuploaded that.
Edited by Sciencejoe, Jun 24 2014, 11:43 PM.
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Prozach
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NOPE.
For skin color in getting black guys right, I used Barkley as a reference and just adjusted from there in making Bo. It's generally more red than you'd think. The only exception I can think of is probably Lee Everett, who is a lot more gray.
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Jun 18 2014, 03:55 PM
I've since made some changes to JC, and also created 2 new wrestlers( Well remade one) hope you like them!.


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As a big Deus Ex fan, I love all of these. The only changes I'd make are I'd take Simons' sunglasses away (I don't remember him ever wearing them) and change JC's theme (if it's gotta be a gag one instead of the DX theme) to "Sunglasses at Night", since he gets that joke thrown at him in-game. That's just a personal taste thing though, as the CAW itself is already friggin' amazing.

I think I saw the new Jensen design tonight. Maybe I just hadn't been paying attention and he was there before, but it really stood out as better than the one I remembered. Great job on that.
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So So
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and change JC's theme (if it's gotta be a gag one instead of the DX theme) to "Sunglasses at Night", since he gets that joke thrown at him in-game.


No way, gotta keep What a Shame!

http://youtu.be/ADCUnTwhKAE?t=4m39s
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Policenaut
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The default Deus Ex theme is like a black hole of hype compared to What a Shame.
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DesuBlade
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深いダー♂ク ・ ファ♂ンタジー♂!
Also, to those who haven't noticed; Ckeo's Adam Jensen model was used in VGCW. Good job Ckeo! Jensen looks really good now.
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Ckeo
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NO WAY, I CAN'T BELIEVE THIS
I'm glad you guys like the Caws! I did originally wanted to use the Deus Ex theme for JC's entrance, but I think nothing can beat the hype of What a shame.
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I was going to make Shovel Knight, but I see he's been done a long time ago, and there's no way I'm topping this. Put him in, Bazza. I think I have a friend I can make for him…

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I have a friend I made for him!

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Edited by Cleveland Rock, Jul 3 2014, 03:28 PM.
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May 8 2014, 12:55 PM


Tag Name: Three Ma Band
Entrance Tag Name: Evolution.
Names: Machop, Machoke and Machamp
Entrance Names: Mall Cho P, Mall Cho Oak and Mall Champ
From: The Old Country
Entrance Music: Pokemon Gold/Silver Rival Metal Remix
Finishers:
Machop: Brain Chop 1
Machoke: Choke Slam 3 (I think)
Machamp: Shell Shock 1

All four can be found on the servers under the Vidya tag, enjoy.
Perfect
Absolutely perfect
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Glover
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For some reason I put this in the WIP thread, then finished it, and didn't submit it. Seeing the Star Road 2 thread reminded me that I should. So here's Hakan, and if you look for Capcom under Most Recent he'll be in the first couple pages or so (haven't checked recently, but it was only a couple weeks ago I put him up).

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Choco Nath
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Part of me feels VCGW needs some Star Ocean Love

Name: Edge Maverick
Game: Star Ocean: The Last Hope
Entrance Theme: Star Ocean: The Last Hope - Cosmic Voyagers
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The entrance needs a bit more work seeing as I originally was going to run with this joke.
Edited by Choco Nath, Jul 6 2014, 12:36 PM.
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KryptikMCM
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Keep Calm and Get Piss
Choco Nath
Jul 6 2014, 12:23 PM
Part of me feels VCGW needs some Star Ocean Love

Name: Edge Maverick
Game: Star Ocean: The Last Hope
Entrance Theme: Star Ocean: The Last Hope - Cosmic Voyagers
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The entrance needs a bit more work seeing as I originally was going to run with this joke.
Consider making the gold parts of his outfit darker? The yellow looks pretty glaring right now. Otherwise...damn, man, another good piece of work.
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TheWorst
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Saw the Liquid Snake CAW on Arena, and while it's amazing I think it needs a better more hype theme than the Hind D theme. I decided to post a couple of my ideas here, because idk where else I would post it in.
Light vs. Darkness Twin Snakes
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=d1v9CAyxRh0
I know it's Twin Snakes, but this is the closest thing to an official theme Liquid Snake has. It's pretty decent, the middle part is boring but beginning is hype enough.
Liquid VR Remix
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Xcti0XQlA_M
Uhhh... You have to see this for yourself. Includes numerous Liquid quotes.
YOU'RE OUT OF TIME!

Yell Dead Cell or w/e is fine too.
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MaxOfFewTrades

Could somebody please tell me where in the Arena episode I could find the new Liquid CAW?
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Cheer This Dan
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MaxOfFewTrades
Jul 7 2014, 11:21 PM
Could somebody please tell me where in the Arena episode I could find the new Liquid CAW?
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